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Home at last: The General's Daughter returns!

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Post by Nanaomi Sugowara Fri Jul 28, 2017 12:40 am



Strong Spirited
Aloof
Analytical

Nanaomi Sugowara

(215/976)


Nanaomi smiled softly and nodded. "Good, very good." Nanaomi started to walk around Luxanna as she made observations. Her right hand reaching out at every observation. "Look towards your target. You have a distaste for killing, but in combat even if you're forced to you must truly aim to kill your opponent. Even if you know you can't.", The woman said as her right hand grabbed hold of Luxanna's chin and re positioned it forward. "Your legs will get strained if you stay in that position for too long. Adjust." Nanaomi spoke, as her right hand reached in between Luxanna's legs and pushed her legs shoulder width apart. "Lastly, your power usage was over extended. Never put all of your energy into the first attack. You'll only ever hurt yourself." Nanaomi's words seemed cold and stern. Her right hand reached out to adjust Luxanna's arm slightly and finger positions before she finally stood back and spoke again.

"Again." She said, her eyes focused on Luxanna's body position, muscle movements, and subtle breaths. Nanaomi herself was quite impressed with Luxanna. Though, she was fearing that the poor girl was trying to outshine herself which could only lead to over taxing and self destructive behavior. A soft almost inaudible sigh escaped Nanaomi's lips as she thought this.



Nanaomi Sugowara
Nanaomi Sugowara

Race : Saiyan
Class : Genius
Rank : General
Power : 92000
Strength : 67
Stamina : 126
Speed : 131
Energy : 180
Perception : 131
Energy Speed : 171
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Post by Luxanna Aurora Fri Jul 28, 2017 12:47 am

Luxanna blushed as the woman began to move her around gently but with purpose, and looked forward at her fictional target. She listened to what the woman said about conserving her power, and charged the attack again, a soft blue sphere, only about the size of a softball shot forth from her hands, trialing the bright blue light, and struck another tree, this time only taking it down, leaving the rest unharmed. She looked up to her mentor again this time, her eyes full of more uncertainty, but hope that Lotus would accept this as a better effort in practice.

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Luxanna Aurora
Luxanna Aurora

Race : Saiyan
Class : Agile
Rank : Student
Power : 42000
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Stamina : 46
Speed : 88
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Post by Nanaomi Sugowara Fri Jul 28, 2017 1:01 am



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Aloof
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Nanaomi Sugowara

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Nanaomi nodded softly as she spoke. "Good. Good." The woman walked out to about, five yards before she spoke up to Luxanna. "You did good. Do it again. This time, aim for me." She said, her eyes locked on Luxanna's movements. Her focus, this time, was the girl's hand. She wanted to make sure she didn't miss the attack even though she was so much faster than it, she doubt it would even harm her let alone hit her if she wanted it to. A soft sigh escaped her lips as her eyes closed for a good minute before opening. She focused, watching the movements of the girl and the beam. She knew it might be slow but in the long run it just wasn't as strong as her own. She was ready, and perhaps, even more prepared than she'd even been for when she was fighting Rikka.



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Nanaomi Sugowara

Race : Saiyan
Class : Genius
Rank : General
Power : 92000
Strength : 67
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Speed : 131
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Post by Luxanna Aurora Fri Jul 28, 2017 1:08 am

Aim at Sensei? Why? That made no sense to Luxanna, as Sensei moved to be in front of her. What if she hurt her? She didn’t want to be responsible for that on an alien planet, especially surrounded by military units who were loyal to her, and elite to boot. She retook her stance with the corrections that her sensei had taught her, and slowly began to charge the attack. She tried not to put too much power behind it, and yet wanted Sensei to at least feel it. She wasn’t sure it would work but she couldn’t be sure until she attempted it.

As the beam reached softball size she fired, the ball streaking toward her sensei. Luxanna desperately hoped that sensei would be okay, and watched intently, as did the group of soldiers that seemingly appeared out of nowhere. Luxanna looked to them as one moved to attack her, but was held back by another, as she waited was Sensei was going to do. All these short, quick thoughts happened in the bried moment it took for the beam to travel the small distance between the two Saiyan women, and yet the instant seemed eternally long to Luxanna.

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Luxanna Aurora
Luxanna Aurora

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Post by Nanaomi Sugowara Fri Jul 28, 2017 1:46 am



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Nanaomi Sugowara

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Nanaomi watched as the beam erupted from Luxanna's hands. It felt rather slow, to her. Nanaomi stood there, waiting for the attack to reach her. In fact, she felt like she was waiting for so long she decided to move to the side, bringing herself directly next to Luxanna's face. As their faces were almost touching, Nanaomi would gently tap Luxanna's nose and whisper, "boop." Into her ear before putting herself back to where she stood. As she did so, the beam would finally strike her in the chest causing a small explosion. As the smoke would clear it could be seen Nanaomi was standing still seemingly unharmed. Albeit with a softball sized black scorch mark on her stomach area that seemed to bypass her clothing entierly. A firm quick nod came from Nanaomi's head as she spoke. "Very good! You've passed. Now, don't move. No matter what. I can't gurentee you'll be safe if you move." Nanaomi commanded, as she lifted her right hand and pointed towards Luxanna.

A small purple orb appeared in front of her finger as particles of the purple energy started to swell from all around the woman into the orb. After a few seconds the orb erupted into a beam easily twice the size of Luxanna. The beam would barrel towards Luxanna at great speeds. Once it was about to strike her directly, suddenly, the beam took a hard ninty degree turn and shoot directly into the sky. This caused a massive pillar of purple light. It was so strong, in fact, that it parted the very clouds around it causing a few rays of sun to cast down upon Luxanna herself. Nanaomi offered a short smile as the beam died down into nothing, offering a soft giggle.




Nanaomi Sugowara
Nanaomi Sugowara

Race : Saiyan
Class : Genius
Rank : General
Power : 92000
Strength : 67
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Speed : 131
Energy : 180
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Post by Luxanna Aurora Fri Jul 28, 2017 3:27 am

Luxanna was completely taken aback as she was booped in the nose by her sensei in the middle of her attack. Then her sensei dashed back and was hit by it. Why did she do that? Why? Lux was so confused she didn’t even realize her sensei had fired her own beam attack right back, until it was sent skyward only feet from her face. Luxanna was stunned at the speed of everything that had just happened, and she stumbled backwards, before falling on her large rump. Her eyes were open wide as she stared at her sensei in confusion.

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Luxanna Aurora
Luxanna Aurora

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Post by Nanaomi Sugowara Sat Jul 29, 2017 12:18 am



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Aloof
Analytical

Nanaomi Sugowara

(284/1702)


Nanaomi slowly started to walk towards Luxanna. Her steps soft, graceful, and slow. The woman's eyes though. They seemed to be fueled by an inborn fire almost as if to say she was determined but to what extent? "You see, Luxanna-chan. When one attacks, one must be ready to kill. It's called killing instinct. Any time I attack, I make sure to release my killing intent." The woman said as she slowly reared back her right fist and forced a punch down towards Luxanna's face. Something seemed, off, however. It would feel as though Nanaomi was, truly, aiming to kill Luxanna just now. Punching to terminate the small girl's life in an instant. As the punch just reached near her it stopped. However, if one were to watch the woman's eyes they would tell a different story. Yes, they would tell of the longing, the begging of some inner sin to be released.

A quick cough and sigh would escape the woman's mouth before she brushed off her clothes. After adjusting what was left of her clothes to the best of her ability she would offer a hand out to help Luxanna up. "I will teach you how to display killing instinct. As with martial arts, even if you don't plan to ever use it, you have to be able to. You'll never be able to defend yourself if you don't truly believe you'll kill the person your attacking." Nanaomi nodded her head fully and abruptly. It was a difficult thing to comprehend for some but it was a true and needed fact. Much like using a gun, if one is to point at the enemy, you must be ready to pull the trigger.



Nanaomi Sugowara
Nanaomi Sugowara

Race : Saiyan
Class : Genius
Rank : General
Power : 92000
Strength : 67
Stamina : 126
Speed : 131
Energy : 180
Perception : 131
Energy Speed : 171
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Post by Luxanna Aurora Sat Jul 29, 2017 12:27 am

Killing intent? Um, okay? You will eventually hurt someone if you do that all the time. Luxanna chuffed at the thought of always threatening to kill an opponent, though as she snapped her mind back to reality Nanaomi’s fist was screaming right toward her face. Luxanna screamed and covered her face, but the attack never struck. She peered between her fingers as Nanaomi pulled the fist away. This must be the killing intent the woman was talking about. It felt a little extreme to the smaller girl. But she took the hand was helped back to her feet.

She listened to Lotus speak about killing intent some more and how she was going to teach it to Lux. Killling intent was not really something Lux had ever had. She’d obviously thought about it before in anger, but never had the urge or actual need to do so. Though she supposed now that she thought about it that her life back home was quite comfortable, and that was probably the reason she had never thought about it before. She sighed and nodded up to her sensei. “I will do what I must if it will keep me and my family alive.”

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Luxanna Aurora
Luxanna Aurora

Race : Saiyan
Class : Agile
Rank : Student
Power : 42000
Strength : 51
Stamina : 46
Speed : 88
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Post by Nanaomi Sugowara Sat Jul 29, 2017 12:55 am



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Aloof
Analytical

Nanaomi Sugowara

(296/1998)


Nanaomi nodded softly and motioned for her to follow. The two would travel quite a ways away. It was a place she'd been told about by her Father. It was a bit of a Trek away considering she didn't know the landscape that well yet. But, after what seemed like a few hours they finally happened upon it. The woman pointed towards the cave as she started to walk in. The woman removed what was left of her shirt and tossed it aside as she adjusted her sports bra. The one legacy she kept from Earth she enjoyed quite a bit. A soft sigh escaped her lips before they finally entered a large cavern. In this cavern was a glistening green lake. The water, purist of pure waters and was filtered constantly by the lime like substance under it. In the center was a small island big enough for both of them to sit on, albeit just barely. "This is where the previous generals would go to meditate and attempt to harness their inner tactician. You see, it's difficult for most Saiyans to think of more than just battle and killing. That's why some had to go out of their way to be tactician-like."

Nanaomi said as her body skipped across the water, never once dipping below the surface. She was now close enough to feel the soft splatter of the waterfall which was inset just slightly from the ceiling. Such a beautiful place lit up by bio-luminescence. It was breath taking. After sitting in her spot the woman would tap the ground in front of her softly, motioning for Luxanna to sit with her. "Come, we'll do some Visualization training." Nanaomi said, her voice soft and caring. Much different than the killing instinct from before.



Nanaomi Sugowara
Nanaomi Sugowara

Race : Saiyan
Class : Genius
Rank : General
Power : 92000
Strength : 67
Stamina : 126
Speed : 131
Energy : 180
Perception : 131
Energy Speed : 171
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Post by Luxanna Aurora Sat Jul 29, 2017 1:35 am

Luxanna followed her sensei for what felt like an eternity on the long trek across the land. As they reached the cave Lux leaned on the wall, catching her breath for only a moment before following Lotus inside. As soon as the cavern opened up Lux’s jaw dropped. The cavern was incredible. The beauty and majesty of the cave had no rival she had seen in her admittedly brief life. She understood now why the Saiyans of old came here to meditate and train. The serenity in this cave had little else one would need to relax.

“Across the…” Luxanna’s voice trailed off as she looked across the lake to Lotus. There was no way she would be able to cross the body of water like that. She sighed and took a running start, immediately splashing into the water and going under. She groaned and resurfaced, and swam over to her mentor, hauling her body out of the water, the tape losing its grip on her small form as she looked up to her master through her sopping wet blue mane. “Not funny.” She grumbled, before pushing the hair back behind her head and long ears, flicking her wet tail.
Luxanna Aurora
Luxanna Aurora

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Class : Agile
Rank : Student
Power : 42000
Strength : 51
Stamina : 46
Speed : 88
Energy : 52
Perception : 79
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